Excerpt! Venomous by Fiona Paul!

I have a special treat for you today!  Check out this excerpt of Venomous, a short story written by Fiona Paul!  If you haven’t read any of it yet, you can backtrack through the blogs hosting segments of the story (see below for links).  Be sure to follow the rest of the blogs; there will be a new excerpt posted every day!

Venomous

A Secrets of the Eternal Rose short story

By Fiona Paul

The year is 1600 and the streets of Venice, Italy are ripe with intrigue and danger. In this introduction to the world of Venom, eighteen-year-old Mariabella has recently elevated herself from the rank of common prostitute to the status of courtesan, a respected high-class escort for those men in Venetian society who can afford them. Mariabella steps out to attend a party on the arm of her powerful new patron, certain that the night will be filled with glamour, secrets, and adventure.

If you missed the last part of the story, check it out on Cover Analysis.

“Sometimes I think my father will never have the money for a proper wedding,” she says. The folds of her lavender skirt sink low on the ground as her body deflates slightly.

“Don’t fret, my goddess,” the boy says. “In my mind, we are already married.” He reaches out to tuck a tendril of dark hair back from her face.

She brightens at his touch. “In your mind I bet we’re doing all sorts of things,” she says playfully. He bends down to murmur something in her ear and her mouth twists into a smile. “Yes, we could, couldn’t we?”

Wind whips strands of dark hair around her face as the boy rests his hands on her waist and bends down to kiss her. She rises to meet his embrace, her gloves hands threading together behind his neck. I shouldn’t stare, but I do. There’s something so graceful about the way their bodies move together.

I duck behind the fountain as they break apart and turn toward the front of the palazzo. Sharp peals of laughter float through the air as their silhouettes gradually fade. It makes me think of bird song and flute music and other sounds of sheer joy.

It has been a long time since I laughed like that. A few months ago, I was entertaining a traveling bard who always seemed more interested in singing to me than kissing me. I thought it was an odd waste of his money, but his songs always started out normal and then got sillier and siller until I couldn’t help but giggle—and then laugh, and then laugh until I snorted. He even gifted me a lute and persuaded me to accompany him in his act a couple of times.

It was fun, and I was happy during my time with him. But eventually he had to move on to another city. It’s for the best. If he returned it’d be one more man I’d want to see against Joseph’s wishes.

For the next part of the story, visit Lauren’s Crammed Bookshelf tomorrow 10/18. [http://laurenscrammedbookshelf.blogspot.com]

Review: Venom by Fiona Paul

 

 

 

Title:  Venom

Author:  Fiona Paul

May Contain Spoilers

From Amazon:

Love, lust, murder, mayhem and high society converge in one thrilling debut

Cassandra Caravello has everything a girl could desire: elegant gowns, sparkling jewels, invitations to the best parties, and a handsome, wealthy fiancé—yet she longs for something more. Ever since her parents’ death, Cassandra has felt trapped, alone in a city of water, where the dark and labyrinthine canals whisper of escape.

When Cass stumbles upon the body of a murdered woman—with a bloody X carved across her heart—she’s drawn into a dangerous world of secret societies, courtesans, and killers. Soon, she finds herself falling for Falco, a poor artist with a mischievous grin . . . and a habit of getting into trouble. Will Cassandra find the murderer before he finds her? And will she stay true to her fiancé or succumb to her uncontrollable feelings for Falco?

Beauty, romance, and mystery weave together in a novel that’s as seductive and stunning as the city of Venice itself.


Review:

When I read that Venom is set in Renaissance Venice, I couldn’t wait to read it.  I love Venice, and think that it’s a great backdrop for any story.  Fiona Paul’s descriptions of the city and culture give Venom a splash of color and excitement; with her vivid descriptions, I could almost hear the water splashing from the oars of the gondoliers and the hustle and bustle of the city.  With its network of twisting , turning canals, Venice is the perfect setting for murder, mystery, and the constant threat of danger.  It’s also home to glamorous parties, wealthy nobles, and exquisite architecture.    I loved all of the details packed into this novel, from the graveyards to Cass’s smoldering old home. 

Cass is an orphan. She is being raised by her elderly Aunt Agnese, a strict matron who expects Cass to behave as her station demands.  Cass, however, wants nothing to do with all of the gentle pursuits expected of her.  Embroidery bores her to tears, she has no patience for timidity, and she wants to question everything around her.  She longs to live.  This gets her into quite a bit of trouble, and Agnese is worried that Cass will cause a scandal and get them both kicked out of her cousin’s house, where they both live until he achieves his majority. While Cass does try to rein in her wilder side, when she stumbles upon the corpse of a murdered woman she just can’t help herself.  She needs to know who she was, and why she was in her friend’s family crypt, instead of her friend, Livi, who died after losing a fight against an illness.

Cass immediately sets the expectation that she is an impulsive, bold girl, and she lives up to that.  She wants to live life instead of just sitting still and watching it spin by her.  She is curious and wants to know what makes the world tick.  Her recklessness gets her into so much trouble, and her aunt’s sternness  just makes her long to do everything that is reckless and exciting.  When she meets Falco, an artist, she is instantly attracted to him.  He is mischievous and spirited, and completely different from her boring, studious finance, Luca.  Even though there is no hope that they could ever be together because of their class differences, Cass is still drawn to Falco again and again.  When the murderer sends Cass a note that she will be the next victim, she feels an even greater compulsion to be with Falco and to savor all of the forbidden attraction that she feels for him.  While I completely bought into the intensity of her emotions and the undeniable charisma between the two characters, I had a hard time liking Falco.  Sweet and fun-loving one moment, he could also be sarcastic and evasive the next. 

There were two plot points that kept me from enjoying Venom as much as I would have liked.  Both are commonly used plot devices in YA fiction that I just can’t connect with.  The first was Cass’s recklessness.  She is impulsive to the point that I began to wonder how she survived into her late teens.   She frequently waited until dark, when all of the aging residents of the household were sound asleep, to creep out of the house and sneak into the graveyard behind the palazzo.  She repeatedly engaged in this dangerous activity, so she could think or write in her journal.  I don’t know about you, but hanging out in a graveyard in the wee hours of the night, alone, with a lantern to announce my presence and my location, just doesn’t seem an intelligent activity to pursue.  Add in one brutal murderer, who has sent a note to you proclaiming the intention to make you the next victim and, I’m sorry, but you obviously have serious issues making a rational decision or you have a death wish.

The second plot point that made me want to rip my hair out – both Luca and Falco, Cass’s love interests, expected her to accept  them at face value, to believe in them and trust them, while not trusting her enough to share potential life saving secrets with her.  This drove me crazy.  Cass catches Falco in a blatant lie, one that causes her to question his character and everything that he has told her, and still he won’t tell her the truth.  All the while proclaiming his intense love for her.  Luca does the same thing later in the book.  Both young men claim to love her, and both are well acquainted with her stubbornness.  She isn’t going to meekly do what they say and stop putting herself in danger.  They both know this about her personality, yet they both remain silent, putting her life at risk.  Whenever I run into this plot device, it just comes across as condescending to me.  These guys claim to care for her, but they are keeping secrets that are going to get her killed.  Trust is a two way street.  I can’t imagine spending the rest of my life with a guy would can’t be upfront with me.  This isn’t romantic; it’s manipulative. Rant off.

While Venom left me disappointed, fans of Hush, Hush and Fallen should enjoy this suspenseful and atmospheric mystery. 

Grade:  C+

Review copy provided by publicist

Waiting on Wednesday–Blood Prophecy

Waiting On Wednesday is a weekly event, hosted by Jill at Breaking the Spine, that spotlights upcoming releases that we’re eagerly anticipating.

Though the series has had its ups and down, I still love the Drakes and all of their friends.  I’ll be sad when the series wraps up with Blood Prophecy by Alyxandra Harvey

In stores January 2013

   

In the thrilling conclusion of the Drake Chronicles, love and loyalties will be tested … and proven once and for all.

Can Solange find her way back home again? And can she do it in time to save everyone she loves from the vampire civil war, hunter attack, and each other?

Because not everyone can survive the prophecy… maybe not even her.

What are you waiting on?